Chapter 20

The will, the champagne, the ammonia

Summary

Faye tries to persuade Kate to stop working and manage the house instead, and Kate refuses, saying she must have the money. That night the Woodmen of the World never arrive — Clarence Monteith has died of a heart attack during the closing ritual — and Kate quietly seeds the girls with the news that Faye is unwell. Then she goes to Faye's decorated room for the promised surprise: a will leaving everything to "Kate Albey because I regard her as my daughter", and the news that there is more than sixty thousand dollars. Kate gives Faye her mother's gold watch, and Faye insists on champagne. Two glasses take the barriers down. Kate tells her what she really does with her regulars — the heelmarks, the razors, the blood caught on white silk — and how she will run the house at twenty dollars a head, then dopes her with paregoric. Sober again after mustard and water, Kate spends the dawn keeping Faye just under the surface with ammonia and a crochet hook until the night becomes an unspeakable nightmare, then screams the house awake and nurses her through it.

Analysis

Wine is Kate's only reliable weakness, and the chapter is built so that her benefactor forces it on her out of affection. What follows is the repair job rather than the crime: hours of precise work with ammonia and an ivory hook to convert a confession into a dream. Ethel's line about setting up with a corpse is planted so the girls will remember the night wrongly.

Plates

Cotton Eye at the door
00 Cotton Eye at the door
The Woodmen do not come
01 The Woodmen do not come
Setting up with a corpse
02 Setting up with a corpse
Dressed like a little girl
03 Dressed like a little girl
The decorated room
04 The decorated room
The will
05 The will
Her mother's watch
06 Her mother's watch
Down the rat hole
07 Down the rat hole
Mustard and water
08 Mustard and water
The house comes awake
09 The house comes awake